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Colombia flagÁlvaro Quijano
The far side of the moon Usually, the far side of the moon is incorrectly called “the dark side” and it’s not properly because of the absence of light in that side, it’s a misconception. In fact, the near and far side of the moon receive almost equal amounts of light directly from the sun. Nevertheless, the effected known as ‘Tidal locking’, it also is the cause of tides, produces that from the earth we always see approximately 60% of moon surface (the near side) caused by a synchronic movement explaining by the effect in question. Some people say the name ‘dark side’ was given like a reference of the radio signals lock of the farthest side, what happens. Indeed, the last Chinese spacecraft Chang’e 4, that was landed on the far side 3 months ago, use the Queqiado satellite to relay the signals to the earth. I appreciate any comment or correction :)

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The far side of the moon is often incorrectly called the “dark side” of the moon because of the absence of light on that side.  In fact, the near and far sides of the moon receive almost equal amounts of light directly from the sun.  [I don’t know how to correct this next part:  Nevertheless, the effect known as “tidal locking” produces tides ________________.]

 From the earth, we see approximately 60% of the moon’s surface (the near side) caused by a synchronic movement explained by the effect in question.  Some people say the name “dark side” refers to the radio signals lock [the word “lock” appears to be incorrect; should it be “located”] on the farthest side.  Indeed, the last [is “last” correct?  should it be “latest”?] Chinese spacecraft, Chang’e 4, which landed on the far side three months ago, uses the Queqiado satellite to relay signals to Earth.

 

Hi Alvaro.  I’m sorry that I’m not very familiar with your topic, so I am not sure my corrections are exactly right.  I made sure, however, that the sentences are grammatically correct.  In your first sentence, you used the words “incorrectly,” “not properly,” and “misconception.”  I eliminated two of those words and just used “incorrectly;” you don’t need the others.  The sentence is now more concise.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

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