Corrections · 1
The far side of the moon is often incorrectly called the “dark
side” of the moon because of the absence of light on that side. In fact, the near and far sides of the moon
receive almost equal amounts of light directly from the sun. [I don’t know how to correct this next
part: Nevertheless, the effect known as “tidal
locking” produces tides ________________.]
Hi Alvaro. I’m sorry that I’m not very familiar with your topic, so I am not sure my corrections are exactly right. I made sure, however, that the sentences are grammatically correct. In your first sentence, you used the words “incorrectly,” “not properly,” and “misconception.” I eliminated two of those words and just used “incorrectly;” you don’t need the others. The sentence is now more concise.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
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