The weekend
This weekend I was very busy, because I went out with my friends on Friday, then on Saturday I was very tired and I had to order my room, on Sunday I had a family day, I went with my family for a walk and we bathed in a river, It was really fun, but I'm tired again, so today I decided to study English
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The weekend
This weekend I was very busy, because I went out with my friends on Friday, then on Saturday I was very tired and I had to organize my room, on Sunday I had a family day, I went with my family for a walk and we bathed in a river. It was really fun, but I'm tired again, so today I decided to study English.0
Excellent. As noted already you need to use full stops instead of some of the commas. You should also use the word tidy instead of order ie. I had to tidy my room. You wouldn't "order your room " but you might "put your room in order" but this would be more unusual than "tidy your room"
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Only comment is that there should be periods after complete sentences, not only commas. Otherwise, it's perfect!
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