Practice for TOEFL Exam 1 hi, everybody, i am practicing for my TOEFL exam and I need your help, I will be very appreciated for your correction and your advice about how to improve my writing by using more advanced words etc, thanks in advance :) Title: It is better to work for business owned by someone else than to work for the business of one’s own family. Most of us always hold this kind of view: those people whose family own its business are very lucky. That means they have a short pass to the success, they don't need to work so hard as ordinary people or maybe they already possess a load of fortune before their birth, They reckon family business as a huge advantage o even privilige. However, I don't agree with this point of view. In my opinion, working for business owned by someone is better, because it means you have the freedom to choice the area in which you want to dedicate yourself. I admit that working for family business is easier and less stressful, but the most miserable thing is you have to do something you don't want to. There are two reasons that support my opinion: First, the job you really passionate about will motivate you to achieve higher goal. When you do your dream work, you will feel motivated, your ambition will be invoked and you will explore new skill voluntarily. You may get your promotion in 1 year and led your team to make a new record. Secondly, every day will be meaningful when you do your dream work. You will invest more time and energy without noticing, you will in high mood every moment while you are working and you will try your best to overcome all the difficulties you confrante. There are a lot of benefit beside the tow points I mentioned above. So when you are facing the similar choice, be brave and follow your heart, make every day is meaningful and motivated for yourself.