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Huge fun at amusement park I went to an amusement park, Lotte world in Korea yesterday. It was a huge blast! I think I took almost things except for kids or payment. I counted and it’s 22 I rode. I took the most popular some and the others minors. That’s the reason I took almost everything was 'Magic Pass'. This offers to enter directly. Amusement park gives three tickets for visitors. But you need a lucky for getting the most popular ones you ride. Because it’s first come, first served by every 15 minutes. I had two luckys so I can go on rides directly which has the most longest line. Therefore I can save my time and enjoy the others.

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I went to an amusement park, Lotte world in Korea yesterday. It was a huge blast! I think I took all the rides except those for the kids. Payment  은 무슨 말인지 잘 모르겠어요.

I kept the count and I rode 22 rides in total. I made it to some most popular ones (or rides) and few other minor/small ones. The reason I took/I was able to ride almost all the rides was because i had the 'Magic Pass'. Basically, it's a pass that allows us to directly enter the park/rides. Normally, the amusement park gives three (types of ) tickets to its visitors. But you need to be 'lucky' as they say to ride the most popular ones because it’s first come, first served basis every 15 minutes. I got two 'luckys' so I was able to directly go on rides even to the rides which had the longest (-est  으로 쓸 수 없는 경우에만 most 필요해요). Therefore I was able to save my time and was able to enjoy a lot of other rides as well.
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Huge fun at the amusement park

I went to an amusement park, Lotte world in Korea yesterday. It was a huge blast! I think I took almost things except for kids or payment. I counted and it’s 22 I rode. I took the most popular some and the others minors. That’s the reason I took almost everything was 'Magic Pass'. This offers to enter directly. Amusement park gives three tickets for visitors. But you need a lucky for getting the most popular ones you ride. Because it’s first come, first served by every 15 minutes. I had two luckys so I can go on rides directly which has the most longest line. Therefore I can save my time and enjoy the others.
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Huge fun at amusement park

Yesterday I went to an amusement park, Lotte World in Korea. yesterday. It was a huge blast! I think I took rode almost things everything except for the kids rides or those for which I would have had to pay. payment. I counted: and it’s It was 22 I rode. I took some of the most-popular rides some and as well as some of the less-crowded ones. others minors. That’s the The reason I took almost everything was I had the park's Magic Pass, which allows you direct access to the rides without buying a ticket. This offers to enter directly. Normally, each visitor to the amusement park gives buys three tickets for visitors. But the most popular rides, which are first come, first served and available only every 15 minutes, require a "lucky" ticket., you need a lucky ticket, which allows you ones you rides. Those are  Because it’s first come, first served and available only by every 15 minutes. I had two lucky tickets so I can could go on rides directly on the rides with which has the most longest lines. Therefore That way I saved my time and for enjoying the others rides.

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