IELTS essay:The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing travel needs
Nowadays, people spend around 720 hours per year in jams; traffic became a crucial problem for city residents. Some people argue that the unique possibility to decrease quantity of cars on the road is to create other ways of people’ interaction with employer, colleagues, shops and educating institutions, meanwhile, in my view, it is possible to reduce traffic only applying a range of different governmental actions.
It is generally accepted that the Internet extends our limits and create new opportunities to work or study abroad, to make new friends, to build love and even to shop online at home. When each person would stay at home, subsequently the level of exhaust emission and traffic will be decreased.
Most people say that for reaching success at work you should always be in the office to demonstrate high level of interaction with clients and colleagues, your ability to work in changing conditions, be multifunctional and to collaborate as a team. However, I think that some other people can be more productive working at home. For instance, introverted people, who cannot build a high level of live communication, are more effective online concentrating on the project in peace and quiet.
From the other hand, I tend to think that working online may cause health problems, while you seat at the desk for an hour, you will never notice changes, although through time your back will hurt so much that you will be forced to call the emergency to help you. As well as working at home and moving less than before, as a result you get some extra weight and you raise risk of obesity which is the reason for diabetes and high blood pressure.
I suppose that it is impossible that everyone will work at home, somebody will have to bring purchases and food and it will be created a new traffic of delivery cars. That is why I tend to think that it is a good idea for some people, though we must find other ways to reduce traffic. For example, government should impose new tax for owning more than one car per family, decrease prices for public transport, to initiate the transport reform and to build new road junctions.
Taking everything into consideration, improving the traffic situation requires investment and political that is sometimes not easy to generate.
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IELTS essay: The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing travel needs
Nowadays, people spend around 720 hours per year in jams; traffic has become a crucial problem for city residents. Some people argue that the only possible way to decrease the number (quantity) of cars on the roads is to create other ways of people’ interaction with employers, colleagues, shops and educating institutions, meanwhile, in my view, it is possible to reduce traffic only by applying a range of different governmental actions.It is generally accepted that the Internet extends our limits and creates new opportunities to work or study abroad, to make new friends, to build relationships and even to shop online at home. If each person (everyone) stays at home, subsequently the level of exhaust emission and traffic will be decreased.
Most people say that for reaching success at work you should always be in the office to demonstrate a high level of interaction with clients and colleagues, your ability to work in changing conditions, be multifunctional and to collaborate as a team. However, I think that some other people can be more productive working at home. For instance, introverted people, who cannot build a high level of live communication, are more effective online when they concentrate (concentrating) on the project in peace and quiet.
From the other hand, I tend to think that working online may cause health problems, while you're sitting at the desk for an hour, you will never notice changes, although with time your back will hurt so much that you will need to call the emergency for help. As well as working at home and moving less than before, as a result, you can get some extra weight and you raise the risk of obesity which is the reason for diabetes and high blood pressure.
I suppose that it is impossible that everyone will work at home, somebody will have to bring purchases and food and it will create new traffic of delivery cars. That is why I tend to think that it is a good idea for some people, though we must find other ways to reduce traffic. For example, the government should impose a new tax for owning more than one car per family, decrease prices for public transport, (to) initiate the transport reform and (to) build new road junctions.
Taking everything into consideration, improving the traffic situation requires investments and political will that is sometimes not easy to get.
I am not a native speaker but I hope it helps. Sorry for mistakes :) I've made
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