Could you check my sentences, please? -37

If there are mistakes, please correct them.

1. vascular disease fatalities have been increasing in recent years.

2. Pornography is often an example of the objectification of women by men.

3. Psychiatric doctors spent many years refining the research.

4. I'm sorry to disillusion you, but artificial insemination is not always good.

5. He is embarking on a blasphemous thesis this year.

6. The anthology is a skillful, witty pastiche of Twelfth Night.

7. She first dabbled in playing harpsichord when she was at a music school.

8. We have a long way to go before you unravel the enigmas.

I really appreciate your help.

Etsuko

Could you check my sentences, please? -37

If there are mistakes, please correct them.

1. The vascular disease fatalities have been increasing in recent years.

2. Pornography is often an example of the objectification of women by men.

3. Psychiatric doctors spent many years refining the research.

4. I'm sorry to disillusion you, but the artificial insemination is not always good.

5. He is embarking on a blasphemous thesis this year.

6. The anthology is a skillful, witty pastiche of Twelfth Night.

7. She first dabbled in playing harpsichord when she was at a music school.

8. We have a long way to go before ewe unravel the enigmas.

I really appreciate your help.

Etsuko