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Be a sporting father My son's Primary school ask every father to play with children once a week in the school . This moring，I go to the playground in the school. I am earlier than the kids to there, there is few pupils playing football. A few minutes later， several kids come to playground, like pupies rushing out of cage. But they like to play with themselves, so i just stand by and take photo for them.

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Be a sporting father

My son's Primary school asks  every father to play with the children once a week in the school . This moring，I go to the playground in the school. I get there earlier than the kids, there are a few pupils playing football. A few minutes later several kids come to the playground like puppies rushing out of a cage (<--- great!). But they like to play with each other, so i just stand by them and take photos of them.
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Be a Sporting Father

My son's primary school asks every father to come to the school and play with the children once a week. in the school.   This morning I go  went to the playground in at the school. I am arrived earlier than the kids to there, so there is were only a few pupils playing football. A few minutes later, several kids come to came running onto the playground like puppies rushing out of their cages. But  They like wanted to play with among themselves, so I just stand stood by and take took photos for of them.


Well done!  I particularly like where you said "like puppies rushing out of their cages" - I can just imagine the scene!  :)

I was also wondering if the title should be "Be a Supportive Father"?  I can see it either way.

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I think that idea propposed by the board of your sons school was perfect.

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