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17/100 My childhood inside a movie theater One of the my favorite hobby is watching good movies and series. The first time that I watched a movie on the movie theater I was about seven years old and I'll never forget of the movie, The Last Starfighter. I don't know if you've already heard of the movie "Cine Paradiso" a wonderful movie that I recommend. This film is about a kid that had a opportunity to visit daily a cine because he became friend of the owner movie theater. I think I was this kid because I had the same opportunity. My older brother was dating with the movie theater owner's daughter. She had a little brother and he had the same age of me, so with him I had free pass to the only movie theather of my city. I lost the track how many times we watched The Last Starfighter. Sometimes we stayed helping the booking officer out, sometimes we stayed in the projection room. Sometimes we stayed behind of the bigscreen, that's right, while the audience watched the film, we stayed on the opposite side. Well, it was a time to remember forever. That cine was my Disney, it was a magical place that I'll never forget. I have set a challenge for myself, to write one entry per day for one hundred days. Please, help me to correct my notebook entries.

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17/100 My childhood inside a movie theater

One of the my favorite hobby hobbies is watching good movies and series. The first time that I watched a movie on the in a movie theater I was about seven years old and I'll never forget of the movie, The Last Starfighter.

I don't know if you've already heard of the movie "Cine Paradiso" a wonderful movie that I recommend. This film is about a kid that had an opportunity to visit daily a cine cinema because he became friend of the owner movie theater owner's friend. I think I was this kid because I had the same opportunity. My older brother was dating with the movie theater owner's daughter. She had a little brother and he had was the same age of as me*, so with him I had a free pass to the only movie theater of my city.

I lost the track of  how many times we watched The Last Starfighter. Sometimes we stayed helping the booking officer out, sometimes we stayed in the projection room. Sometimes we stayed behind of the big screen. That's right, while the audience watched the film, we stayed on the opposite side.

Well, it was a time to remember forever. That cinema was my Disney World, it was a magical place that I'll never forget.

In formal English you would say:  he was the same age as I.  (as I was)
 
I have set a challenge for myself, to write one entry per day for one hundred days. Please, help me to correct my notebook entries.

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