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What does it mean to you to have a dream?
Get and stay out of your comfort zone if you want to achieve your dream. I think it is a good advice, because if it is really what you want to have, you have to overcome all complex and difficulties. Focus in what you want to have happen.
For example, I had not been learning English until 9 grade, so I knew some simple words like “family” , “ school” and “animals” and that is all. But in 9 grade we had to pass exams and I thought social science is easy for me, so I decided to choose English as exam only because it seemed impossible and hard. Sounds strange, yeah? So I think I can say it was my dream to pass this language. Well, a dream is just a dream. A goal is a dream with a plan and a deadline, so I had been studying a lot and trying not to give up, because my teachers always said me * you cant do it . Please choose another subject*.
So I think when you're ready to quit, you’re closer than you imagine.. it was gripping experience of self-development.
Also once I had a dream to be less shy, because it interfered me to feel myself free. And I started to stay out of my comfort zone. I was afraid to speak but I tried. I was afraid to say what I thought, but I forced myself. Too many of us are not living our dreams because we are living our fears. So we have to overcome all obstacles to achieve dream ( of course if it bears a nice promise and not threatened to others).
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What does it mean to you to have a dream?Get and stay out of your comfort zone if you want to achieve your dream. I think it is a good advice, because if it is really what you want to have, you have to overcome all complex and difficulties. (fragment Error ) Focus in what you want to have happened. achieve.
For example, I had not been learning (incorrect Tense) English until 9 grade, so I knew some simple words like “family” , “ school” and “animals” and that is all. But (don't start with FANBOYS) in 9 grade we had to pass exams and I thought social science is easy for me, so I decided to choose English as exam only because it seemed impossible and hard.(too long sentence, break it down ) Sounds strange, yeah (informal) ? So I think I can say it was my dream to pass (incorrect verb) this language. Well, a dream is just a dream. A goal is a dream with a plan and a deadline, so I had been studying a lot and trying not to give up because my teachers always said (change the tense since you said ALWAYS) to me * you can't do it. Please choose another subject (major)*.
So I think when you're ready to quit, you’re closer than you imagine.. it was a gripping (nice choice of Vocabulary) experience of self-development.
Also once, I had a dream to be less shy, because it interfered me to feel myself free. And I started to stay out of my comfort zone. I was afraid to speak but I tried. I was afraid to say what I thought, but I forced myself. many of us are not living their dreams because we are living their fears. So we have to overcome all obstacles to achieve dream ( of course if it bears a nice promise and not threatened to others).
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