Free time and hobbies. Ana I have many hobbies. On the weekends I always ride my bicycle, do exercises, and swim. During the weekdays I am usually tired because of school, but I like to read some book

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Free time and hobbies. Ana I have many hobbies. On the weekends I always ride my bicycle, do exercises, and swim. During the weekdays I am usually tired because of school, but I like to read some books and watch movies. I hate to waste too much time on Social Media. Nicole On the weekends I love to go out with my friends. We go to the cinema. My parents don’t have time for relaxing during the weekdays, but on Sunday we like to spend time together. I also ike to play the guitar, but I don’t like to sing because I am not good at it. Peter In my free time I like to play video games. I always play with my brother. I play with him because it’s funny. I also like to watch videos on YouTube. My favorite youtuber is PewDiePie. I don’t like to read because it’s boring.

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Free time and hobbies.

Ana

I have many hobbies. On the weekends I always ride my bicycle, exercise and swim. During the weekdays I am usually tired because of the school, however I like to read books and watch movies. I hate to waste too much time on Social Media.

Nicole

On the weekends I love to go out with my friends. We usually go to the cinema. My parents don’t have time to relax during the weekdays, but on Sunday we like to spend time together. I also like to play the guitar, but I don’t enjoy singing because I am not good at it.

Peter

In my free time I like to play video games and I always play with my brother. I play with him because it’s funny. I also like to watch videos on YouTube. My favorite youtuber is PewDiePie. I don’t like to read because it’s boring.

Thank you! I've edited the text and I've added some names. It's not a descrition about my free time. It's about other people.

Hi Lucia: Here are a few corrections you can make: *1st paragraph -On the weekends I always ride my bicycle, exercise, and swim. "I hate" is strong language so you may want to choose a different expression. For example: I spend little time on Social Media as I believe it is a waste of time. *2nd paragraph - Beginning with On the weekends is repetitive as you already used it. You could begin with I also love... There are other revisions you could make, but I believe it is best to make a few changes at a time. Others will offer their suggestions. Good luck. Glenda

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