government and new building
I think use bunds of service to build up new buildings and roads can give citizens more convenient.new buildings can relief the house pressure, and the new roads can remission the traffic jam.The shortage of house and traffic jam are important affairs in a modern society.solving living problem is one of basic terms of our city.Individuals need improve living environment, making our city more livable and the pleasant to eye. This strategy attractive tourism and the investor businessman to our city, it can improve city's economy.
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government and new building
I think use *bunds of service* to build up new buildings and roads can give citizens more convenience t. New buildings can relief relieve the housing pressure, and the new roads can remission the help reduce traffic jams (or help reduce traffic congestion).The shortage of housing and traffic jam congestion are important affairs issues in a modern society. Solving living problem is one of the basic terms necessities of our city. Individuals need an improved living environment, making and this will make our city more livable and the pleasant pleasing to the eye. This strategy attractive will boost tourism and the attract investors businessman to our city, it can .This will in turn improve the city's economy.* *The term "bunds of service" is not very clear to me. If you like, maybe try to explain what you mean in the comments, I can then try to help you correct this first sentence.
Note, either say "investors" or "businessmen" . There is no need to say "investor businessman"
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