Ginger and Pickles
Once upon a time there was a grocery store where you could buy nearly everything you need, its name was Ginger and Pickles. The shop was managed by two friends, Ginger was a cat and Pickles was a terrier. They had all kind customers but Pickles had to serve the mice because Ginger saw them like a dessert and its mouth made water. On the other way Ginger had to serve rabbits because they were afraid of Pickles every time they went to the store.
Tabitha Twitchit was the owner of the other shop in town but she was tighter with his customer than our friends, she didn’t give any credit that’s why they preferred Ginger and Pickles.
After a long day of work Ginger and Pickles sat in the back of the shop to eat their dinner, a policeman came to shop and called them, when they were at the counter he wrote a note and gave it to them, Pickles read it and got upset.
The next day an envelope came beneath the front door where they were getting bills full of taxes, because Ginger and Pickles gave to their customers a lot of credit they didn’t have enough money to pay it, they had to close the grocery store.
Nowadays Ginger is living in the warren and Pickles became a game-keeper, then someone else took care of local busyness of Groceries.
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Ginger and Pickles
Once upon a time there was a grocery store where you could buy nearly everything you need, its name was Ginger and Pickles. The shop was managed by two friends, Ginger, who was a cat, and Pickles, who was a terrier. They had all kind customers but Pickles had to serve the mice because Ginger saw them like a dessert and its made his/her mouth made water. On the other way hand Ginger had to serve the rabbits because they were afraid of Pickles every time they went to the store.Tabitha Twitchit was the owner of the other shop in town but she was tighter with his customer than our friends, she didn’t give any credit that’s why they preferred Ginger and Pickles. (pronoun conflict: his/she)
After a long day of work Ginger and Pickles sat in the back of the shop to eat their dinner, a policeman came to the shop and called to them, when they were at came to the counter he wrote a note and gave it to them, Pickles read it and got became upset.
The next day an envelope came beneath slipped under the front door where they were getting bills full of taxes, because Ginger and Pickles gave to their customers a lot of credit they didn’t have enough money to pay it, they had to close the grocery store. (difficult to understand, maybe The next day, an envelope full of bills and taxes was slipped under the front door, ...)
Nowadays Ginger is living in the warren and Pickles became a game-keeper, then eventually someone else took care of local busyness of Groceries. Grocery business.
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