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The quotation "Whoever said money can't buy happiness simply didn't know where to go shopping". I disagree with the quotation "Whoever said money can't buy happiness simply didn't know where to go shopping". I am a happy person, I have everything that I need, I fell in love and found my good friends. If someone tries to buy these important values, no one will be happy. The richest people have a ton of material things, but very often they feel alone. It's better to meet a lovely person and live a good life together, then you pay for the best relationship and in the end, you will be left after the breakdown of your business. We need to believe in yourself and be ready that our happiness will happen to us without spending money. I wish love and happiness to all people in the world.

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The quotation "Whoever said money can't buy happiness simply didn't know where to go shopping".

I disagree with the quotation: "Whoever said money can't buy happiness simply didn't know where to go shopping". I am a happy person, and I have everything that I need. I fell in love, and found my good friends. If someone tries to buy these important values, no one will be happy. The richest people have a ton of material things, but very often they feel alone. It's better to meet a lovely person and live a good life together, then you pay for the best relationship, and in the end, you will be left after the breakdown of your business. We need to believe in ourselves yourself and be ready so that our happiness will happen to us without spending money. I wish love and happiness to all people in the world.

Well done! Remember that in English there are three ways to separate a complete sentence:

With a period: "I am a happy person. I have everything I need."

With a comma and a conjunction: " I am a happy person, and I have everything I need."

With a semicolon: " I am a happy person; I have everything I need."

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