Improve public health
How to improve public health becomes a problem faced by us. In my opinion, although increasing the number of sport facilities contributes positively to good health and fitness in some extent, it is not the most effective method and other measures are necessarily needed.
Advocates of the increase in the sport facilities believe that it helps people to stay healthy. It is convenient for people who want to do some sports if the facilities is each-to-reach. In addition, facility is necessary for some physical activities.For example, playing basketball, which is a popular sport among young boys. Basketball player can not enjoy their game without basketball court.
On the other hand, I agree with those people who deny that increasing number of sport facilities is the best solution to health-related problem. The first reason is that the addition facilities just appear someone interesting in sports but not all people who need excises. In addition, there are several measures can be used to raise the level of public health. For example, High tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contribute to poor health.
On a conclusion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results.
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Improve public health
How to improve public health becomes is a problem faced by us by the world. In my opinion, although increasing the number of sport facilities contributes positively to good health and fitness in to some extent, it is not the most effective method and other measures are necessarily (for emphasis maybe say ¨desperately¨) needed.Advocates of the increase in the for sport facilities believe that it they helps people to stay healthy. It is convenient for people who want to do some sports if the facilities is are each-to-reach in their community. In addition, proper facilityies is are necessary for some physical activities.For example, playing basketball, which is a popular sport among young boys. Basketball player can not enjoy their game without basketball court. , cannot be enjoyed without a basketball court.
On the other hand, I agree with those people who deny that object to increasing the number of sport facilities is as the best solution to health-related problem. The first reason is that the additional facilities just appear someone interesting appeal to those interested in sports but not all people who those in need of exercises. In addition, there are several other measures that can be used to raise the level of public health. For example, High tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contribute to poor health.
On a In conclusion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results.
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