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relationship like a field I got by bus today morning and had a time for thinking. Unfortunately it happens with me rare in my life) I looked at window and I don't know why, but I thought about relationships. Our world is full notices and articles about ideal relationship, how can you find an ideal person and live with him/her whole life, but! Does that relationship exist in real life? I don't think so. I suppose to relationship is like a huge field. There are a lot of hills and holes, fresh grass and dry, old leaves, somewhere puddles and even dirty, but somewhere flowers and drops of dew. And all of them exist at this moment, interact and influence each other, define our behavior and our day. What do you think about it?

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A relationship is like a field

I got by  rode/took the bus this today morning and had a time for thinking. Unfortunately it happens with me rarely in my life) I looked at the window and I don't know why, but I thought about relationships. Our world is full of notices and articles about an ideal relationship, how can you find an ideal person and live with him/her for your whole life, but does but! Does that relationship exist in real life? I don't think so. I suppose to a relationship is like a huge field. There are a lot of hills and holes, fresh grass and dry, old leaves, somewhere there are puddles and even dirty parts, but somewhere there are flowers and drops of dew. And all of them exist at this moment, They  interact with and influence each other, and define our behavior and our day. What do you think about it?

Well done! You did a nice job describing how a field can be a metaphor for relationships.

We can use "to ride" or "to take" when we want to describe traveling by bus.  

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Joseph, thank you very much!:)
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hi I think these relationships its not in right way ,because his negatives and heart effects more than positives ,so we should take this in the right way which is marriage because its legal and he protect our selves from hearts and he safety to our hurts from broken...etc ,plus that avoid entering in the relationships before marriage through protect our children .... and selves ,special what we see what's happen in universities and another places and how this prefer on them ! Thanks Your friend Farouk
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This is how I would have written your post: "I rode the bus this morning, which gave me time to think (Unfortunately, it happens rarely in my life.) I looked out the window, and I don't know why, but I started to think about relationships. Our world is full of advice and articles about the ideal relationship, how someone can find that perfect person to fit into their life. Does that kind of relationship exist in real life? I don't think so. I suppose relationships are like a huge field. There are lots of hills and valleys, green grass, and dead leaves, an occasional puddle, dirt everywhere, and flowers sprinkled with dew. All these exist in the same moment, interacting and influencing each other, defining our mood and our day. What do you think of this?"

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