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government repair the old buildings I think government should spend money on the maintenance of old buildings .First of all.This strategy is benefits to country's culture .Some old buildings witness the history in country. And then .old buildings represents culture diversity .The different characters has different meanings .indaviduals should focus on ancient culture .Secondly .old buildings can develop economy in country .it can abstractive tourists who never see the old buildings.when government repairs them .The government set a tickets in these areas.It can boost the tourism and increase the revenue

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The government should repair the old buildings

(if you mean a specific government e.g. the Chinese government, say "The government". If you mean all governments in general, say "Governments should repair...") 

I think the government should spend money on the maintenance of old buildings. First of all, this strategy has benefits for the country's culture. Some old buildings bear witness to the history of the country, and old buildings represents cultural diversity.


I have not corrected this paragraph below yet. Can you please try writing it again first because I am not sure what you are trying to say. Thank you!

.The different characters has different meanings .indaviduals should focus on ancient culture .Secondly .old buildings can develop economy in country .it can abstractive tourists who never see the old buildings.when government repairs them .The government set
a tickets in these areas.It can boost the tourism and increase the revenue


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