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The Story of a Country Mouse This is the story of a little country mouse called Timmie Willie. One day the little mouse was enjoying his peaceful life in a beautiful garden when a gardener left a vegetables basket near him. Curious and nervous as a country mouse should be Timmie Wllie approach to the hamper and got inside through a tiny hole at the bottom of it. Once inside it he saw a coupe of peas that devoured without hesitation. With his belly full he fell asleep, when he woke up was frightened because the basket was being carried by a cart. At the time the cart stopped and the hamper was left in the ground Timmie Willie flew away and realized he was in a kitchen, so he got in a little hole located in the wall’s corner where found a bunch of mice serving the dinner, they invited him to take the precious food with them, but even though he was hungry the fright and concern won’t let him be calm until the next day. After his little adventure the country mouse returned to his priceless garden with new experiences and friends. The Winter had come and one of his new friends came from far to visit the garden he had talked about so much. Before the snow was about to melt and turn into water Johnny Town-House our newest little mouse’s friend decided to go back to his home, so he says goodbye and waits for a new adventure with Timmie.

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This is the story of a little country mouse called Timmie Willie. One day the little mouse was enjoying his peaceful life in a beautiful garden when a gardener left a vegetables vegetable basket near him. Curious and nervous as a country mouse should be, Timmie Wllie approach to approached the hamper and got inside through a tiny hole at in the bottom of it. Once inside it he saw a coupe of peas that he devoured without hesitation. With his belly full he fell asleep,. When he woke up, he was frightened because the basket was being carried by a cart. At the time Then, the cart stopped and the hamper was left in on the ground. Timmie Willie flew ran away and realized he was in a kitchen, so he got in climbed into a little hole located in the wall’s corner corner of the wall, where he found a bunch of mice serving the dinner. They invited him to take eat the precious delicious(?) food with them, but even though he was hungry the fright and concern won’t let him be calm until the next day he couldn't calm down until the following day because of the fright and concern.. After his little adventure the country mouse returned to his priceless garden with new experiences and friends. The Winter had come and one of his new friends came from far away to visit the garden he had talked about so much. Before the snow was about to melt and turn into water, Johnny Town-House, our newest little mouse’s friend, decided to go back to his home. So he says said goodbye and waited for a new adventure with Timmie.

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There are different possibilities, but these would be my suggestions.

Buen trabajo! :)

Julian M. (USA) 🏳️‍🌈

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