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The Bogey-Beast Hi everybody! My name is Juan I’m improving my writing skills, I would like you to help me. I read an article last week from a Spanish speaker that recommended reading children’s stories to improve both, reading and writing, so this is a little essay about that one I found. The Bogey-Beast This story starts describing the life of a humble woman who barely has enough food to subsist, making errands for her neighbors. One day she found a pot on the road, wondering how could that piece of ornament came to that desolate place, at that precise moment one thought cross her mind, she could maybe use it to put her flowers, but when her eyes looked inside she realized it was full of gold, nervous and anxious couldn't find what to do, after that she covered it and carried it over her shoulders. A few hours passed before she got tired so she laid on the ground to rest, when she woke up the precious gold had been turned into silver but she didn't disappointed at all, just looked the bright side of the situation. She put again her precious treasure on her shoulders and walked to her cottage, after a couple of hours she lost her beath and then laid on the ground to rest, when she woke up the silver turned into iron but as she showed at the first time it happened just looked the good side. At the moment she got to her house the priceless treasure turned into a haystack that she used to keep the front door open, everytime the situation seemed to get worse the woman just laughed and saw the good. PD: i think at the end the haystack turned into a beast, with long ears and a tail..

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The Bogey-Beast

Hi everybody! My name is Juan I’m improving my writing skills, I would
like you to help me. I read an article last week from a Spanish
speaker that recommended reading children’s stories to improve both,
reading and writing, so this is a little essay about that one I found.

The Bogey-Beast

This story starts by describing the life of a humble woman who barely has enough food to subsist, making doing errands for her neighbors. One day she found a pot on the road, wondering how could that piece of art ornament came to that desolate place, at that precise moment one thought crossed her mind, she could maybe use it to put her flowers in, but when her eyes
looked inside she realized it was full of gold, nervous and anxious, she didn't know couldn't find what to do, after that she covered it and carried it over her shoulders.

A few hours passed before she got tired so she laid on the ground to rest, when she woke up the precious gold had been turned into silver but she didn't wasn't disappointed at all, just looked on the bright side of the situation.

She put her precious treasure on her shoulders again and walked to her cottage, after a couple of hours she lost her breath and then laid on the ground to rest, when she woke up, the silver turned into iron but, as she showed at the first time it happened did before, she just looked on the good side.

At the moment she got to her house the priceless treasure turned into a haystack that she used to keep the front door open, every_time the situation seemed to get worse the woman just laughed and saw the good.

PD: PS: i think at the end the haystack turned into a beast, with long ears and a tail.

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