"My Family and Other Animals" by Gerald Durrell
I've read my first retold book. It's "My Family and Other Animals" by Gerald Durrell.
This story about vacation of Durrell's family on Corfu island. There were five person: Gerald, Mother, Lesly, Larry, Margo and their dog. They didn't know Greek. One man whose name was Spiro known American. So he became their friend. Spiro helped them to find villas and bought food. They invited a lot of friends so they changed villas three time as a result. Their gardens were full of animals and insects. Gerald loved animals very much and was exploring them. So he got magpies, snakes, scorpions, one big wild bird on Corfu. His mother was very calm person but she was worried that Gerald had not any lessons. Then she became search some teacher for the son. One of teachers was Peter who advised to Gerald to write something in English everyday. So that way Gerald began to write his books.
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"My Family and Other Animals" by Gerald Durrell
I've read my first non-fiction retold book. It's "My Family and Other Animals" by Gerald Durrell.This story is about a vacation of Durrell's family on Corfu island. There were five people person: Gerald, his Mother, Lesly, Larry, Margo and their dog. They didn't know Greek. One man whose name was Spiro could speak known American English. So he became their friend. Spiro helped them to find villas and buy bought food. They invited a lot of friends so they changed villas three times as a result. Their gardens were full of animals and insects. Gerald loved animals very much and was researching exploring them. So he found got magpies, snakes, scorpions, and one big wild bird on Corfu. His mother was a very calm person but she was worried that Gerald was not having had not any lessons. Then she became searched for a some teacher for her the son. One of the teachers was Peter who advised to Gerald to write something in English everyday. So that way Gerald began to write his books.
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"My Family and Other Animals" by Gerald Durrell
I've read my first retold book. (Contractions are not generally used in formal writing, so you should use "I have read" here, but the preterite tense "I read" would be used more commonly in this context.) It's It is called "My Family and Other Animals" by Gerald Durrell.This story is about the vacation of Durrell's family on Corfu island. There were five person people: Gerald, Mother, Lesly, Larry, Margo and their dog. They didn't know Greek. One man whose name was Spiro known American spoke English. So he became their friend. Spiro helped them to find villas and bought buy food. They invited a lot of friends so they changed villas three times as a result. Their gardens were full of animals and insects. Gerald loved animals very much and was exploring them (exploring doesn't seem like the right word in this context--I'm not sure what you mean). So he got magpies, snakes, scorpions, and one big wild bird on Corfu. His mother was a very calm person but she was worried that Gerald had not any lessons. Then she became search some teacher for the son. (I'm not really sure what you mean here. Maybe "She began to search for some teachers for her son.") One of teachers was Peter who advised to Gerald to write something in English everyday. So in that way Gerald began to write his books.
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