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Correct my writing, please! Hi, everybody! After watching this video, I realize that I have been making some punctuation mistakes when I write, for example, the appropriate use of commas. Sometimes, I use unnecessary commas because I am not sure where I need to put them. Therefore, I consider this is one of my weaknesses when writing. I know I need to work on them, and I will do it taking as references some resources mention in the video. Another mistake I have realized I am making is eloquent variation, I repeat some words in my texts and this probably happens, because I do not know enough synonymous of adjectives, nouns and expressions in English. I am sure I will overcome these weaknesses over time, reading and writing practice.

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Correct my writing, please!

Hi, everybody!

After watching this video, I realize that I have been making some punctuation mistakes when I write. For example, the appropriate use of commas.
Sometimes I use unnecessary commas because I am not sure where I need to put them. Therefore, I consider this is one of my weaknesses when writing. I know I need to work on them and I will do it taking as references some resources mention in the video. Another mistake I have realized I am making is eloquent variation, I repeat some words in my texts and this probably happens because I do not know enough synonyms of adjectives, nouns and expressions in English. I am sure I will overcome these weaknesses over time with reading and writing practice.

Hi I removed unnecessary commas and the other corrections are in bold.  I do not know what you mean by eloquent variation so I cannot correct that!!

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