Daily Life

Yesterday, I got up at 8.30 am. Then, I took a shower and brush brushed my tooth teeth. After that, I took an English class online. By the way, I like learning English and I enjoy my English Time. I came to arrived at my office at 10.00 am. I written some words in wrote more of my dissertation and did some analysis for my dissertation it too. I went to the gym, after I finished my work, till 7 o'clock pm. In the gym, I take took a yoga class. Yoga can help me relax after a busy day. I came back home at 10 o'clock with my a tired body. A busy day, isn't it?

--- When writing time, try and stick to one format. 

10am. or 10 o'clock. 

Daily Life

Yesterday, I got up at 8.30 am. Then, I took a shower and brushed (past tense, -ed is like adding 了 to a word) my tooth teeth (plural, more than 1 tooth). After that, I took an English class online. By the way, I like learning English and I enjoy my English Time. I came went to my office at 10.00 am. I written wrote some words in my dissertation and did analysis for my dissertation. I went to the gym after I finished my work till  at 7 o'clock pm. In the gym, I take took (past tense) a yoga class. Yoga can help helps me relax after a busy day. I came back home at 10 o'clock with my tired body. A busy day, isn't it?

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英文有太多语法规则, 对吧？You just need to practice past, present, and future tense. Everything else is fine. 真的不错。