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Delhi is a major metropolis of India, also called the heart of India. This sprawling city has some of the most fascinating historical monuments like Red Fort and Qutub Minar, scrumptious local cuisines, and multifarious activities to attract tourists from all around the world. Apart from all these attractions, this city also faces many predicaments on a day-to-day bases. This bustling city is always under the rush and din of the traffic. The streets are mostly chock-a-block with cars and this is resulting in the rise of air pollution in the city. Even with the advances in the infrastructure and transportation could not do enough to mitigate this problem.
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Mr Oscar (Brighton,UK) and Mr Don charles(London, UK) come from the UK . How come their versions are different, from a grammatical standpoint?
For instance : (1) and is called vs and called.
(2) has resulted in the rise vs are resulting in the rise.
(3) it has not been vs this is not.
I hate to break it but In trying to solve one problem, you guys created another.
bye the way I am a learner.
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Please check the grammar
Delhi is a major metropolis of India, and is also called the 'heart of India'. This sprawling city has some of the most fascinating historical monuments like Red Fort and Qutub Minar, scrumptious local cuisines, and multifarious activities to attract tourists from all around the world. Apart from all these attractions, this city also faces many predicaments on a day-to-day bases basis. This bustling city is always under the rush and din of the traffic. ["This bustling city faces enormous traffic issues"] The streets are mostly chock-a-block with cars and this is resulting has resulted in the rise of air pollution in the city. Even with the advances in the advancements in infrastructure and transportation, it has not been could not do enough to mitigate this problem.- I have never heard of "rush and din", is it a phrase?
Very well done! It sounds very professional.
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Delhi is a major metropolis of India, also called the heart of India. This sprawling city has some of the most fascinating historical monuments like Red Fort and Qutub Minar, scrumptious local cuisines, (comma not required before the word 'and")and multifarious activities to attract tourists from all around the world. Apart from all these attractions, this city also faces many predicaments on a day-to-day bases basis. This bustling city is always surrounded by under (surrounded may be a better way to phrase this) the rush and din of the traffic. The streets are mostly chock-a-block with cars and this is resulting in the rise of air pollution in the city. Even with the advances in the infrastructure and transportation this is not could not do enough to mitigate this problem.0
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