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Trip to Europe I was in Berlin and Paris on last week. It was my 1th trip to abroad. I am little bit worried.

I traveled with my best friend Anastasia.

I didn’t expect something special from Berlin, but this city impressed me. It’s quit, cozy and ecological place. There are a lot of bikes and bike’s road. Recently, I’ve known that Berlin is vegan capital. And it is. Because there are a huge range of vegan, sugar free, gluten free products in supermarkets and markets. We bought a lot of avocado, raspberries and rice. It’s very tasty!

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Trip to Europe

I was in Berlin and Paris on last week. It was my 1stth (first) trip to abroad, so I am was a little bit worried.

I traveled with my best friend Anastasia.

I didn’t expect something anything special from Berlin, but this city impressed me. It’s quiet, cozy and eco-friendlylogical place (or: quite a cozy and eco-friendly place). There are a lot of bikes and bike’s roads (or cycling roads). Recently, i learned I’ve known that Berlin is the vegan capital of Germany. And it is. Because there are is a huge range of vegan, sugar free, gluten free products in supermarkets and markets. We bought a lot of avocado, raspberries and rice. It’s They were very tasty!

Hi Mariya! Great text! I think i would love Berlin :)

The text is clear, but I made some corrections. For example, "quiet" is the opposite of "loud", and "quite" is an adverb used before adjective ("quite cozy" or "quite friendly"). 

Hope this helps!

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