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Hepl me check my essay From past to present color always play an important role in the human’ history. According to modern psychologists, some research showed that color could impact directly to our consciousness and moods. I personally believe that a proper color represents for good will and shows tenderness that is the reasons why public places like offices and hospitals choose proper color for design and decorate.

On the one hand, we have a connection with color when we beginning of life. Parents and teacher teach us about different colors and scientists believed that child’ ability to classify different color is connected with their caliber and talent. In our lives, people have been trains to respond with different color through actions and feeling. For example, we can see the way people driving or crossing street, they have strong reacts with traffic light such as the red light send immediate alert to our brain to stop vehicle while green light signal us to go ahead. Therefore, it is important to use soothing and proper color for some places like school, hospitals or offices.

On the other hand, people tend to reacts with different color from experience life. For instance, people relate red with blood and white with peace. Besides, people in some countries relate color for certain moods. For example, westerner believed that blue icon for something comfort and coziness while red imagery for somethings violence and war.

In conclusion, the energy of color widely use to decorate building and bring positivity to people. But nowadays, color impact may not use like a treatments method. However, I believed that color can affect people feel and bring wonderful emotion in their daily life. Moreover, I hope scientists will research to bring color into medicine as a treatment method.

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Hello Jenni, I'm NOT a native speaker so I just made some corrections that I'm pretty certain of. I marked some words light blue - it seems to me that you might want to replace them with other words but I can't tell you which ones. So please wait for a native speaker's answer!


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From past to present color has always played an important role in the human history. According to modern psychologists, some research showed that color could impact directly on our consciousness and mood (Note 1). I personally believe that a proper color represents good will and shows tenderness. That is the reasons why public places such as (Note 2) offices and hospitals choose proper colors  (Note 3) for design and decoration.

On the one hand, we have a connection with color from birth / as soon as we are born (from the very beginning of our lives). Parents and teachers teach us  different colors and scientists believe that a child’s ability to classify different colors (of just distinguish colors) is connected with their caliber and talent. In our lives, people have been trained to respond to different colors through actions and feelings. For example, we can see the way people are driving or crossing a/the street, they have strong reactions to traffic light colors : the red light sends an immediate alert to our brain to stop the vehicle while the green light signals us to go ahead. Therefore, it is important to use soothing and proper colors for some places such as school, hospitals or offices.

On the other hand, people tend to react to different colors based on their life experience. For instance, people relate red to blood and white to peace (Note 4). Besides, people in some countries relate color to certain moods. For example, westerner believed that blue icon for something comfort and coziness while red imagery for something like violence and war (Note 5).

In conclusion, the energy of color is widely used to decorate buildings and bring positivity to people. But nowadays, color impact may not be used like a treatment method. However, I believed that color can affect people's feelings and bring wonderful emotions into their daily lives. Moreover, I hope scientists will do research (or will help to) to bring color into medicine as a treatment method.


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From past to present color has always played an important role in the history of man. According to modern psychologists, some research showed that color could have an affect on our consciousness and moods. I personally believe that certain colors represent good will and show tenderness, that is the reason why public places like offices and hospitals choose certain colors in their  design and decoration.Therefore, it is important to use soothing and appropriate colors for some places like school, hospitals or offices.

On the one hand, we have a connection with color  from the moment we are born. Parents and teachers teach us about different colors and scientists believe that a child’s ability to classify different colors is connected with their caliber and talent.

In our lives, people have been trained to respond to different colors with actions and feelings. For example, we can see the way people driving or crossing the street have a strong reaction to traffic lights,  the red light sends an immediate alert to our brain to stop the vehicle while the green light signals us to proceed. 

On the other hand, people tend to react to different colors from their experience. For instance, people relate red to blood and white to peace. Besides, people in some countries relate color to certain moods. For example, westerners believe that blue is for something comfortable and cozy while red imagery for some is connected to violence and war.

In conclusion, the energy of color is widely used to decorate buildings and bring positivity to people. But nowadays, color may not be used as a treatment. However, I believed that color can affect people feelings and bring wonderful emotions into their daily life. Moreover, I hope scientists will research the use of color in medicine as a method of treatment .

Nice essay, logical arguments. I moved one sentence to a more logical position in the text (green)

Try to learn verb patterns to help you with your writing - learn to, relate to, respond to, have a reaction to - all used with infinitive. have an affect on .

If we are talking about a state which started in the past and continues up to the present we use the present perfect (have/has + past participle)

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