Writtind desi

My sister is my twin, but we aren't identical. Her name is Crisner Betancor. Her name comes from the combination of the names Cristóbal and Nerio. Yes, as seen in the movie Twilight. We have light brown skin, we have green eyes, brown hair, and small noses. She works as gardener near her home.

We have a dog and his name is Thor. He is a very good pet. He is small and his colour is black and brown. He has brown eyes. He is very clever, he always urinates in the street, never in my house.

I have a boyfriend. His name is Daniel Ventura, yes, as the character Ice Ventura. He is a coach of children in a soccer/football team, Acodetti. He is taller than me and he has big brown eyes, like chocolate, and short brown hair.

Writing Homework (I'm not sure what this second word was meant to be?) 

My sister is my twin but we aren't identical. Her name is Crisner Betancor. Her name comes from the union of two names; Cristóbal and Nerio. Yes, from the film (UK) / movie (US) Twilight. We have light brown skin, (we have - repetition not necessary here) green eyes, brown hair, and small noses. She works as a gardener near home.

We have a dog whose name is Thor OR We have a dog.  His name is Thor. He's a very good pet. He's small, and his colour is black and brown. He has brown eyes. He is very clever.  He always urinates in the street, never in my house.  

(A more natural alternative to the above sentence would be "He's a small black and brown dog".)

I have a boyfriend. His name is Daniel Ventura, yes, the same as the character Ice Ventura. He is a coach of children in team fútbol Acodetti. He is taller than me.  He has big brown eyes, the same as chocolate, and short brown hair.

(A more natural alternative to two sentences above:  "He's a childrens' football coach"

                                                                                               "He has big brown eyes, like chocolate") 

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