Could you check my sentences, please? -32

If there are mistakes, please correct them.

1.His improvised speech in at the hall was a tear-jerker.

2. I've found I read in the chronicle of that mass deportation in the 1900s, when thousands of people were forced to leave the country.

3. The entire family was demeaned by his disobedience.

4. The oratorical evangelist asked the leader to accept the revocation of the right.

5. There is a ramp in this building for the disabled.mitigation of the impact when the people who wear prosthetic limb is using the stairs.

6. I cringed at the sight of my boyfriend going on a three day drinking binge because it was so repulsive.

7. Six varsities are currently vying to get funding for their research project.

8. She's always trying to second-guess the boss menacingly.

I really appreciate your help.

Etsuko

Could you check my sentences, please? -32

If there are mistakes, please correct them.

1.His improvised speech at the hall was a tear-jerker.

2. I've found in the chronicle that mass deportation happened in the 1900s--the time when thousands of people were forced to leave the country.

3. The entire family was demeaned by his disobedience.

4. The oratorical evangelist asked the leader to accept the revocation of the right (To what? ^_^ Please add it.) .

5. There is a ramp in this building for the mitigation of the impact when the people who wear prosthetic limb is  are using the stairs.

6. I cringed at the sight of my boyfriend going on a three-day drinking binge / of my boyfriend who has been binge drinking for three days  (more natural)because it was so repulsive.

7. Six varsities are currently vying to get funding for their research project.

8. She's always trying to second-guess the boss menacingly.

I really appreciate your help.

Etsuko

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Your sentences were really well written. I didn't have to correct it alot. 頑張って！^_^