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My hometown My hometown is a small city in Shanxi Province, in China. It is Linfen City, we also call it "Flower and fruite City". That name comes from the most famous street in 80s last centry. The street is named "Flower and fruit Street". There are lines fruit trees beside the street, such as pomegranate tree, apple tree, pear tree, and so on. It has a long history more than 5000 years. The first king of China called Yao made Linfen as the capital. Now, Yao's palace becomes a famouse scenic spots. The palace is not far from my home. Till the end of 2010, the population is 4,316,612. With the development of the economics, people become rich. More and more families owned their own cars. That makes the traffic congestion. Our main mineral product is coal. On one hand, it can make the mine owner get great fortune overnight. On the other hand, itpolluted the environment. The sky was always grey several years ago. But the government planted lots of trees and closed some polluting factories. Now, we have a better atmosphere.

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My hometown

My hometown is a small city in Shanxi Province, in China. It is Linfen City, we also called it "Flower and Fruite City". That name comes from the most famous street in the 80s. last centry.
The street is named "Flower and Fruit Street" because it is lined with fruit trees,  There are lines fruit trees beside the street, such as pomegranate tree, apple tree, pear tree, and so on.
It has Linfen City has a long history of more than 5000 years. The first king of China, called Yao, made Linfen as the capital. Now, Yao's palace has becomes a famouse scenic spots. The palace is not far from my home.
Till At the end of 2010, the population is was 4,316,612. With the development of the economy economics, people have become rich. More and more families owned their own cars, whichThat makes the traffic congestion congested.
Our main mineral product is coal. On one hand, it can make the mine owner get great fortune  rich overnight. On the other hand, it pollutes the environment. Several years ago the sky was always grey several years ago. But the government planted lots of trees and closed some polluting factories. Now, we have a better atmosphere.

 

Very nice Sophia.

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