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It is better to work at home than in an office. Do you agree? Nowadays many people work at home and they prefer it before an office. However, working at home has some disadvantages. On the one hand, when you work at home, you are always really alone. Whereas, in an office there are more workers and you could meet brilliant people. This is a good idea for to make deep friendship. On the other hand, it is true that if you work at home, you can have your own timetable but sometimes, as you don’t have anyone to control you, maybe you don’t do all the timetable. However, if you work in an office you must do your timetable because otherwise you will not be too productive. Finally, working in an office do that you can distribute the hard work with your coworkers so that you will have less stress than if you have to work alone in your home, because you must have all the work. In conclusion, Working at home might be an amazing idea. However working in an office do that you will be more productive and will have more stability.

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It is better to work at home than in an office. Do you agree?

Nowadays many people work at home and they prefer it before to an office. However, working at home has some disadvantages.

On the one hand, when you work at home, you are always really alone. Whereas,* in an office there are more workers and you could meet brilliant people. This is a good idea for to make making deep friendships.

On the other hand, it is true that if you work at home, you can have your own timetable but sometimes, as you don’t have anyone to control you, maybe you don’t do all stick to the timetable. However, if you work in an office you must do stick to your timetable because otherwise you will not be too productive. productive enough.

Finally, working in an office do means that you can distribute the hard work with your coworkers so that you will have less stress than if you have to work alone in your home, because you must have all the work.

In conclusion, Working at home might be an amazing idea. However working in an office do means that you will be more productive and will have more stability.


* Normally sentences don't start with "whereas". Saying "...really alone, whereas in an..." sounds more natural. Normalmente las oraciones no empiezan con "whereas". Decir "...really alone, whereas in an..." suena más natural.

Very good entry! I understood everything you wanted to say, only minor mistakes :)

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