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Answering to Facebook's question Do you really want to know what’s on my mind? I don’t think so.

You spent the most of your time pretending to care about people, but you don’t, why? Maybe we could talk about your selfish-attitude, couldn't we? What about all of the beautiful cit. like “I’ll be there for you” “always by your side” or “you don’t have to ask, you deserve it”; oh please let me say something about your behaviour: the only person who can save you it is you, don’t pretend to believe in what people say, they’re just acting a part, which is the one I’ll never figure out maybe, because lying is the essence of this tragic society.

I’m done with all this mess, I’m sick of you.

I’m taking a break from that.

So fall, fall again, stay there, take your time and finally get up.

(Don't worry it is just so to speak😅)

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Answering Facebook's question

Do you really want to know what’s on my mind? I don’t think so.

You spent the most of your time pretending to care about people, but you don’t. Why? Maybe we could talk about your selfish attitude, couldn't we? What about all of your beautiful (I guess this next is a misspelt English swearword, so I'll just replace it :) )  words, like “I’ll be there for you”,  “always by your side” or “you don’t have to ask, you deserve it”?  Oh, please, let me say something about your behaviour: the only person who can save you it is you. Don’t pretend to believe in what people say. They’re just acting a part, which is what (is this what you mean by "the one"?)  I’ll never figure out, maybe, because lying is the essence of this tragic society.

I’m done with all this mess. I’m sick of you.

I’m taking a break from all that.

So fall, fall again, stay there, take your time and finally get up.

(Don't worry it is just a manner of speaking 😅)

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Answering Facebook's question

Do you really want to know what’s on my mind? I don’t think so.

You spent the most of your time pretending to care about people, but you don’t, why? Maybe we could talk about your selfish-attitude, couldn't we? What about all of the beautiful cit. like “I’ll be there for you” “always by your side” or “you don’t have to ask, you deserve it”; Oh please let me say something about your behaviour: the only person who can save you,  is you, don’t pretend to believe in what people say, they’re just acting a part, which is the one I’ll never figure out maybe, because lying is the essence of this tragic society.

I’m done with all this mess, I’m sick of you.

I’m taking a break from that.

So fall, fall again, stay there, take your time and finally get up.

(Don't worry it is just so to speak😅)


Some nice writing with just a few (small) corrections.

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I still care for many people, though I know many of us keep pretending. I don"t care about "the tragic society". I believe that I create my nearest environment. Honesty in my world appears where I stop lying to myself and others... Keep your eyes open. Life has black, white, green as well as other colours.

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