The trip to NASA
I made a trip to NASA with my family on Saturday last week. We were allowed to visit the Missing Space Center and Pilot Training Lab with tourer guidence at independent platform which are builded all around the side in the second floor. We were asked to quiet when we visited.
Nobody worked in Missing Space Center when we visited because it is Saturday. But we saw some group of highschool students doing experiments in the Pilot Training Lab. We thought that some good opportunities were offered by NASA to advance the view of students.
if you want to visit NASA, working days are supposed to go by us. You can watch more woking activity on your way.
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The Trip to NASA
(or you can say "Our trip to NASA", "My trip to NASA", "A trip to NASA" or "NASA trip" - "the' is a definite article, use it to refer to something that has already been mentioned - e.g. "I made a trip to Nasa. The trip was fun".)
I made a trip to NASA with my family on Saturday last week. We were allowed to visit the Missing Space Center and Pilot Training Lab with a tour guidance at independent platforms which are built all around the side in the second floor. We were asked to be quiet when we visited.
Nobody was working in the Missing Space Center when we visited because it was (your story is in past tense so use "was" here) Saturday. But we saw some groups (if it was one group, say "a group", if it was more than one group say "some groups") of high school students doing experiments in the Pilot Training Lab. We thought that some good opportunities were offered by NASA to advance the education of students.
If you want to visit NASA, working days are supposed to go by us. This way, you can see more working activity on your visit.
Green part above - I am not sure what you mean here, do you mean "I recommend visiting on a workday"?
很棒，我也想去！！！
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The trip to NASA
I made a trip to NASA with my family on Saturday last week. We were allowed to visit the Missing Space Center and Pilot Training Lab with tourer guidence guidance at the independent platform【what's that?】, which are builded were built all around the side in the second floor. We were asked to be quiet when we visited.Nobody worked in was working Missing Space Center when we visited because since it is was Saturday. But we saw some a【some sounds too informal here, for my tastes】 group of high school students doing experiments【more specifically: conducting experiments】 in the Pilot Training Lab. We thought that some good opportunities were offered by NASA to advance the view of students. We thought that maybe NASA had granted these students the noble opportunity to explore their areas of interest, here at the Pilot Training Lab.
if you want to visit NASA, working days are supposed to go by us【NASA's touring schedule is flexible, and can be adapted to suit your needs... is this what do you mean?】. You can watch more woking activity on your way【this seems disconnected from the previous sentence. Also, I think you mean "work activity"】.
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I suspect that the "Missing" space center is a misspelling for some similar sounding name, maybe Mission Control or something else. You might want to double-check the name.
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You're lucky, I've never visited NASA but I would love to ! It must be interesting.
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