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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON March 10th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON March 10th

I had a blast day yesterday because I watched the movie, which got the awards at the show of academy, yes you might notice what the movie is already, it's "green book". So impressed. I actually don't expect this higher because this movie is said that it was similar to ”Intouchable". Intouchable was so great. People in this movie is so sweet and have the emotion heartfelt, I mean they are so kindness to every people. Plus, one popular music is used in this movie, yes it is September. I love this song and the band Earth wind and Fire so moch. That's why I love that movie so I was really not expected GreenBook even it got the lots of awards. But I watched plactically this moved in the cheater, there was me enjoying of this. I was so moved and impressed. Lots of music, especially black musics in this movie is enjoying me. Right after watching this, I googled them, and then of course, typing this while listening the musics.

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I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON March 10th

I had a lot of fun yesterday because I watched a movie, that won many academy awards. You might be able to guess what the movie is already, it's "green book". I was so impressed. I actually didn't expect this because I heard the movie was similar to ”Intouchable", which was so great. The people in the movie were so sweet, I mean they were so kind to everyone. Plus, one popular song is used, September. I love this song and the band Earth Wind and Fire so much. I was really not expecting to like GreenBook as much as I liked Intouchable even it got lots of awards. I watched this movie in the theater, and I really enjoyed it. I was so moved and impressed. There was lots of music, especially by black musicians. Right after watching this, I googled them, and of course, I'm typing this while listening the songs.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON March 10th( writing about watching Green Book) I had a lot of fun yesterday because I watched a movie, that own many academy awards. You might be able to guess what the movie is already, it's ""Green Book". I was so impressed. I actually didn'T expect this because I heard the movie was similar to "intouchable", which was so great. The people in the movie were so sweet, I mean they were so kind to everyone. Plus, one popular song is used, September. I love this song and the band Earth Wind and Fire so much. I was really not expecting to like Green Book as much as I like Intouchable even it got lots of awards. I watched this movie in the theater, and I really enjoyed it. I was so moved and impressed. There was lots of music, especially by black musicians. Right after watching this, I googled them, and of course, I'm typing this while listening the songs

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