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A very formal letter Dear Mr Williams I’m writing you this letter to get information about the language courses in London at the Big Ben School of English. There are some issues that I would like you to clarify. First, I would like to know how many students there will be in the school and in each class because I have Attention Deficit Disorder (ADD) and I need a friendly atmosphere surrounding me which helps me to flourish my motivation. Furthermore, I would also like to know what qualifications the teachers have because they will have to be reported on my situation. Due to the variety of activities the school offer, I would like to ensure if the price covers everything, and if the school area has several amenities, like bus stop or bike shed. Finally, it would be incredibly great to know more about the resources the school has for a student with ADD or similar situations. I’m looking forward to hearing your response. Feel utterly free to write me if you want to ask me anything else. Yours sincerely, Brian

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Dear Mr Williams

I’m writing you this letter to get information enquire about the language courses in London at the Big Ben School of English. There are some issues that I would like you to clarify.
First, I would like to know how many students there will be in the school and in each class, because I have Attention Deficit Disorder (ADD) and I need a friendly atmosphere surrounding me which helps me to flourish my motivation in order to flourish. Furthermore, I would also like to know what qualifications the teachers have because they will have to be reported on (experienced with?) my situation. Due to the variety of activities the school offers, I would like to ensure if the price covers everything, and if the school area has several amenities like a bus stop or bike shed. Finally, it would be incredibly great to know more about the resources the school has for a student with ADD or similar situations.
I’m looking forward to hearing your response. Feel utterly free to write me if you want to ask me anything else.
Yours sincerely,
Brian

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