Bonjour Sophie !
S.t.p. trouves les corrections et suggestions au-dessous :
About vineyards ...
I need some help, would you correct me please? [(a) Can you please help correct me? b) I need some help with corrections, please feel free/don't hesitate to correct me!)]
A vine begins to produce its grapes after the/its third year, regardless of the its age. Grapes will only begin to grow on stalks that is at least one year old. (Stalks will need to have matured for at least a year before grapes will begin to grow). As a result of this/in view of this/in light of this/in fact/for this reason/consequently, we only prune our vineyard once every year.
Thanks for your help!