gender equality

Gender Equality

Notes: Title capital letters

During the period of ancient Chinese feudal society, females were often used as a tool to give birth to a child.

The status of females have been improving after the People’s Republic of China built, but due to influences of the feudalization,
many females are facing a lot of unfair treatment, such as employment right, reproductive right, property right etc., they don’t have the same right as a male in China.

Their status improved after the People's Republic of China was built. However, due to the influences of the feudal era, many females are now facing a lot of unfair treatment in the domains of employment, reproduction and property ownership. They don't have the same rights as the males do in China.

I think gender equality is the state of equal ease of access to resources and opportunities regardless of gender, including economic participation and decision-making and the state of valuing different behaviors, aspirations and needs equally regardless of gender.
We should solve the problem in three aspects.

I think gender equality is the state of equal easiness of access to resources and opportunities, regardless of gender, in the areas of economic participation and decision-making. It is also the state of valuing different behaviors, aspirations and needs equally.

Education
The Ministry of Education should enhance the education of gender quality from primary school, teaching students how men and women should respect each other, culturing students’ concept of gender equality. the education is not limited to school, that should also be rolled out to society.

The Ministry of Education should enhance the education of gender quality from primary school by teaching students how men and women should respect each other and culturing training the students of the concept of gender equality. The education should not be limited to only school, that but also be rolled out to society.

Notes: The oxforddictionary.com doesn't list 'culture' to be a verb and so we need to find another suitable word with the same or similar meaning.

Law and rules
The nation should strengthen research on the issues, improving more measures to promote the status of females, protecting women rights of developing their personal abilities and make choice without the limitations set by stereotypes.

The nation should strengthen research on the issues, improve more measures to promote the status of females, protect women rights to develop their personal abilities and make choice without the limitations set by stereotypes.

Notes: The bold words show that in this structure there needs to be a parallel. All three words are in the simple verb form.

Change male and female concept
The aspect is very important for equality between men and women.
When a man is married, he should respect his wife, housework is a common thing for both husband and wife, men should not be used as a tool what gives birth to a child, meanwhile, female should be economic independence, respect their own ideas, and strive to improve themselves.

When a man is married, he should respect his wife. Housework is a common thing for both husband and wife and men should not be used as a tool to gives birth to a child. Meanwhile, female should be financially independent, respected for their own ideas, and supported to strive to improve themselves.

Notes: I added 'supported' at the back because again, there's a rule of parallel. 

should be ... , ...., and ...

if you're going to put in passive form into the first blank, then the following verb should also be in passive form.