My new job
After 7 years of working in the same company as a Software engineer, I move to a new one last month.
My new company is specialized in the Native content advertising which is a type of online advertising that match the form, feel and function of the platform upon which it appears and it is often found in social media feeds, or as a recommended content on a web page.
My Job description is "Big Data Engineer" and I am responsible for Data gathering, processing and preparing the "Big Data" infrastructure to be analyzed by a Data Scientist. On the other hand, I implement with the engineering team the machine learning algorithms proposed by the Data scientists to recommend content to online users and optimize online campaigns used by the advertisers to reach new audiences and increase their sales.
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My new job
After 7 years of working in the same company as a software engineer, I moved to a new one last month.My new company is specialized specializes in the native content advertising, which is a type of online advertising that matches the form, feel, and function of the platform upon which it appears and it is often found in social media feeds or as a "recommended content" on a web page.
My job description is "big data engineer" and I am responsible for data gathering and processing, and for preparing the "big data" infrastructure to be analyzed by a data scientist. On the other hand, Along with the engineering team, I also implement with the engineering team the machine learning algorithms proposed by the data scientists that recommend content to online users and optimize online campaigns used by the advertisers to reach new audiences and increase their sales.
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* Generally, don't capitalize job names/descriptions unless the job is part of a person's title. For example,
Big Data Engineer Kassem is responsible for data gathering.
but
Kassem, a new big data engineer at the company, is responsible for data gathering.
It is similar to "Queen Elizabeth" vs. "Elizabeth is the queen."
* Your use of "on the other hand" is grammatically acceptable, but I have two problems with it. First, usually there is an earlier sentence that starts with "On the one hand..." Second, the one hand/other hand idiom usually describes two "opposites." For example,
I have four parrots as pets. On the one hand, parrots are really loud and messy, so I don't recommend them as an easy pet. On the other hand, I really love them, so I am happy to tolerate the noise and mess.
If the two things are similar, it might be better to use "Additionally" or "Furthermore"; for example,
In my job, I am responsible for data gathering. Furthermore, I also implement the machine learning algorithms proposed by the data scientists.
Some people argue you don't need to use the first part of the one hand/other hand idiom. In my opinion, to drop the first part ("On the one hand"), the contradiction between the two things should be very obvious. For example,
I really hate my job. On the other hand, it pays very well, so I stay.
Here's an interesting English language forum debate about using "on the other hand" without using "on the one hand":
https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/20227/on-the-other-hand-without-the-first-hand
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really..you master in big data..thats great.. beside i just like ui ux programme although i take software engineer too hha
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