Would you hire a guided tour during your vacations?
I have asked this to my english friends, I am curious about it. I hope these sentences are correct.
Would you hire a guided tour during your vacations?
Reasons why I would actually hire a tour guided:
WHY A TOUR?
Save time! They already know all the best places in the city and we'll also have the chance to meet new people.
WHY A LOCAL VEGAN?
As vegans, they know what it´s like trying to find vegan activities and delicious food on your travels. Here you will see another side of the city and spend time with a like-minded person.
WHY A PLANT-BASED FOOD TOUR?
They have personally visited and tested all the places on the tour.
We won't be disappointed!
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Would you hire a guided tour during your vacations?
I have asked this to my English friends. I am curious about it. I hope these sentences are correct. ("I asked my English friends this" is also possible.)Would you hire a guided tour during your vacations?
Reasons why I would actually hire a tour guided:
WHY A TOUR?
Save time! They already know (maybe "The guide will already ..." would be clearer ?) all the best places in the city and we'll also have the chance to meet new people. (Why have you switched from you - would you hire - ti "we" here?)
WHY A LOCAL VEGAN?
As vegans, they know what it´s like trying to find vegan activities and delicious food on your travels. Here (This would only work as a sign on a place where you can hire a vegan tour guide - anywhere else you might want to write something like "With a local vegan tour guide, ..." ) you will see another side of the city and spend time with a like-minded person.
WHY A PLANT-BASED FOOD TOUR?
The guides have personally visited and tested all the places on the tour.
We won't be disappointed!
The switch from I to "we" is a little troubling, but not a big issue. It's not clear whether this a poster promoting tours, or a questionnaire. Consistency would help. Best might be to settle on "you" throughout, though even sticking to "I" or "we" throughout your suggestged answers would be better than switching as you do here.
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tour are someone who know everything about that place , I know that it will cost little bit but to save time and visits more place with less time. The tour also help us to learn there culture and also tell about the history of that place and other unknown fact .so I think ,I is good to hire a tour guide whenever we visit to new place or unknown place.
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