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The Shenzhen Bay Park (part 1) - Writing Challenge Day 9 (Description) Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country. The Shenzhen Bay Park One of the most famous parks in Shenzhen is the Shenzhen Bay Park, which is located in the east of Nanshan district. The park is a narrow piece of land that's about 5 kilometers in length along the Shenzhen Bay, which encompass a small gulf that separates Shenzhen and Hong Kong. The park has a well-maintained road and beautiful view. There is a bike path meandering along the coast, and beside it, a pavement extends out on the embankment. On the coastal side of the passage, there are a large number of rocks piled to prevent erosion and there are mangroves in the water near the land here and there. On the other side of the passage, there are some palm trees and grass planted. On the lawn, there are multiple gravel paths criss-crossing. Thank you for your review.

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The Shenzhen Bay Park (part 1) - Writing Challenge Day 9

(Description) Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country.

The Shenzhen Bay Park

One of the most famous parks in Shenzhen is the Shenzhen Bay Park, which is located in the east of Nanshan district. The park is a narrow piece of land that's about 5 kilometers in length along the Shenzhen Bay, which encompasses (or ....Bay, encompassing a ...) a small gulf that separates Shenzhen and Hong Kong.

The park has a well-maintained road and a beautiful view. There is a bike path meandering along the coast, and beside it, a pavement extends out on the embankment. On the coastal side of the passage, there are is a large number of rocks piled to prevent erosion and there are mangroves in the water near the land here and there. On the other side of the passage, there are some palm trees and grass planted. On the lawn, there are multiple gravel paths criss-crossing.

Thank you for your review.

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