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Spain flageva maria
redacion eva From monday to friday 5:00 I get up I prepare things and breakfast I animals, 5:50 leave my house 6:45 I take bus I make time and 9:00 go to class I get out at 13:40, when I arrive home eat get some rest and then do couple things then leave ready the next day´s things . weekends I wake up at 10:00 in the morning breakfast I fee the animals, clean the house to cook when is´s my turn get some rest and the do ot hen things go out with family and friends.

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Hi Eva, A couple things here: First, days of the week are always capitalized in English because they are proper nouns. Some of your sentences are a bit long and repeat the word "I" a lot. Commas are our friends here, and allow us to not have to repeat "I" and "and" too often. Say "I" for the first thing you did, then separate each task with a comma. Leave "and" for the last task. "At 5:00 I get up, prepare things, make breakfast and feed the animals." Proper comma placements are important because the sentence can have a different meaning without them. My correction is my best interpretation of your writing, but it is possible that others will read it differently, as it is not always clear what you are are trying to express because commas are needed to for structure. Hope this helps! Deanna
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From Monday to Friday:

At 5:00 I get up, prepare things, make breakfast and feed the animals. At 5:50 I leave my house and at 6:45 I take the bus. At 9:00 I go to class and I get out at 13:40. When I arrive home, I eat, get some rest, then do a couple things. Then I prepare things for the next day.


Weekends:
I wake up at 10:00 in the morning, eat breakfast, feed the animals, and clean the house. When it's my turn, I cook. Then I get some rest and do other things like go out with family and friends.

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