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There are three "on". Are they all correctly used? I woke up in the middle of the night at the sound of someone knocking on the door of my room. I opened it and there was my dad standing blind drunk again. I just closed the door on him. I couldn't sleep again so I started cleaning up my room. While I tried to move a TV, it almost crashed on my toe.

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There are three "on". Are they all correctly used?

I woke up in the middle of the night at the sound of someone knocking on the door of my room. I opened it and there was my dad standing there drunk again. I just closed the door on him. I couldn't sleep again, so I started cleaning up my room. While I tried to move a TV, it almost crashed on my toe.
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There are three "on". Are they all correctly used?

I woke up in the middle of the night at the sound of someone knocking on the door of my room. I opened it and there was my dad standing blind drunk again. I just closed the door on him. I couldn't sleep again so I started cleaning up my room. While I tried to move a TV, it almost crashed on my toe.


"On" is correctly used.


I woke up in the middle of the night to the sound of someone knocking on my door. I opened it, and there was my dad, blind drunk again. I just closed the door on him. I couldn't go back to sleep, so I started cleaning my room. When I tried to move my tv, it almost came crashing down on my toe. (It almost fell onto my toe). (It fell and almost crushed my toe.) (It fell and almost landed on my toe.)

(I'm not sure what you mean in the last sentence.)

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I got it! Thanks, Adele.
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Yes, fine! For the last one you could put ‘on to my toe’ for clarity. 🙂

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