Hello! Please, check grammar in my article.

My ex's friend Kate, lives in Geneva Switzerland she's 33. Has green eyes; is tall and thin and has strong long hair. She works for an international company. Trades securities on the world's stock markets. She's a smart person is educated in philosophy and economics and speaks three languages. Is very strict but in official life she is delightedly kind. Smokes one cigarette a week. likes to earn and collect money, travel the world, monitor her health and takes a morning run in the quiet park. She doesn't like deceitful people. And I respect her because she is her own person and has built her own life.

Try not to constantly repeat the same sentences beginning with "she" also it is better if you can put her character traits into groups that are connected

1 her name; where she lives--> her age --> physical appearance

2 where she works -->what she does --> her education ->her abilities --> (what she is like and doesn't like *) <--* can also go at end of (1) if you prefer

3. why you respect her and the summary "because she is her own person and has built her own life

My ex's friend's name is Kate. She's 33. She works for an international company. She trades (??)securities on the world stock market. She lives in Geneva in Switzerland. She's got long white and strong hair. She's tall and thin. She has green eyes. She has two(???)top diplomas: philosophical and economic. She's very strict but in life in general she is deceitful(.??kindly). She speaks three languages. She's a smart person. She smokes one cigarette per week. She likes to earn and collect money, travel around the world,  take care of her health and in the morning she  runs in the quiet park. She doesn't like deceitful people. And I respect her because she built her person herself.



Around 9 mistakes,  that's 4 out of 5 and  4.5 out of 6, C/A