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About the obstacles when I lived in the U.S The teacher gave us a topic today, which was about the obstacles when we arrived in the U.S. The topic made me remember the days when I arrived the U.S. When I arrived the U.S with my daugher, my husband picked up us in the midnight. It was very late .On the second morning, my husband drove us to the nearist super marked, and then he went to work. I needed to buy some groceries beacuse my husband just moved to the new appartment on the day we arrived. There was nothing in the fridge. I bought something and went back home. Our home is about 5 minutes from the market. On our way home , it started to rain suddengly. First came the tiny rain, but it changed into the heavey rain in one minute. We couldn't find any place to stay. Although we brought an umbrella , it couldn't prevent the heavy rain. When we arrived home, we were all wet. After that, I never walk to buy grocery.

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About the obstacles when I lived in the U.S

The teacher gave us a topic today, which was about the obstacles (we faced/encountered) when we arrived in the U.S. The topic made me remember the days when I (first) arrived (in) the U.S. When I arrived (in) the U.S with my daugher, my husband picked up us in the (at) midnight. It was very late .On the second morning, my husband drove us to the nearist (spelling - nearest) super marked (spelling- supermarket), and then he went to work. I needed to buy some groceries beacuse my husband just moved to the new appartment on the day we arrived. There was nothing in the fridge. I bought something and went back home. Our home is about 5 minutes from the (super) market (explanation - a supermarket is a big store. A market tends to be a outdoors, and sells mainly produce such as meats, vegetables, fruits). On our way home , it started to rain suddengly (spelling - suddenly). First came the tiny (light) rain, but it changed into the heavey rain in one minute (but within one minute, the rain became heavy) . We couldn't find any place to stay. Although we brought an umbrella , it couldn't (didn't) prevent the heavy rain. When we arrived home, we were all wet. After that, I never walk (walked) to buy grocery (again).


Good job! Your main issues were with spelling, although the mistakes were only minor. Well done :)

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You can use 'returned or came back' instead of 'went back'.
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You can use 'returned or came back' instead of 'went back'.

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