First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello,my name is Phoebe.I'm a Chinese girl and comes from Wenzhou,Zhejiang province.Singing and reading books are my interests.All these can make me calm down and stay alone so that I can have much time and room to think about,such as daydreaming.On contrast,I'm outgoing and talktive in my friends' opinion.
To be honest,I'm not sure English is my favorite subject, though I'm a English major student.Reading and comprehension score always disturbs me after I failed the college entrance examination.What's more,I'm frail when I have to talk with other person in English.I feel terrible but I do not know what I can do for my poor practical English ability.Could u please lend me a hand?
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello,my name is Phoebe.I'm a Chinese girl who comes from Wenzhou,Zhejiang province.Singing and reading books are my interests.All these can make me calm down and stay alone so that I can have much time and room to think about,such as daydreaming.On contrast,I'm outgoing and talktive in my friends' opinion.
To be honest,I'm not sure English is my favorite subject, though I'm a English major student.Reading and comprehension score always disturb me after I failed the college entrance examination.What's more,I'm frail when I have to talk with other people in English.I feel terrible but I do not know what I can do for my poor English practical ability.Could u please lend me a hand?
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Phoebe send me a message please! I can't send you a message because you didn't leave the message option.
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Jesse's corrections are all ok. To be better, you have to talk with people in English. Find someone patient and practice... 再见！
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