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Please check my text ,thans for you ! Hi, everybody. This is our homework assigned by our teacher. Please check my text ,thans for you ! We choose the Cross-border E-commerce is Ebay. It is a “Costomer to Costomer” model that we know. Their founder is Pierre Omidyar. The headquarters is located in San jose, California,USA. Their goal is to become a online shopping markert in the world. The company have established on September 4th ,1995. It is one of the largest global online trading platforms, to services the personal users and enterprise users .Ebay had 26 services sites which were distributed all over the world. For example, Austria,Australian, Belguim, Brazil and so on. Espercially, the main services site in USA.They selled differient goods at each of services sites.The main products are Cell phone accessories,Women’s clothing ,Fashion jewelry and so on . But now, Many Cross-border platforms become more and more stronger. The one of competitors is Amazon.I don not say anthing . Using a poet said words to express it. ----takeing his own path and let others talk about it. Thanks for your listening.

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Please check my text ,thans for you !

Hi, everybody.
This is our homework assigned by our teacher. Please check my text ,thanks for you !
We choose the Cross-border E-commerce company is Ebay. It is a “Coustomer to Coustomer” model that we know. Their founder is Pierre Omidyar. The headquarters is located in San jose, California,USA. Their goal is to become an online shopping markert in the world. (They already are an online shopping market, aren´t they? Would you say maybe, "the biggest online shopping market in the world"?)The company have was established on September 4th ,1995. It is one of the largest global online global trading platforms, to which services the personal users and enterprise users people and companies alike.Ebay had (or has?) 26 services sites which were distributed all over the world. For example, Austria,Australian, Belguiium, Brazil and so on, among others. Espercially, tThe main services site is located in the USA. They selled  sold differient goods at each of their services sites. The main products are Cell phone accessories, Women’s clothing and Fashion jewelry. and so on .
But now, many Cross-border platforms become more and more stronger are becoming stronger. The one of One of the main competitors is Amazon. I don not say anthing I won´t say anything about it / I won´t go into it . Using a poet´s said words to express it: ----taking his own path and let others talk about it. (I don´t know this quote so I can´t comment on it - but i would use both verbs either in infinitive or with -ing at the end).
Thanks for your listening.


Hi Fanny, above my corrections, Hope you find them useful.:) 

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