It's really good! Just a few things to reword though. "I have lunch in a little while." That's good! "I'm not eat breakfast everyday. So... Now very hungry!" I think you meant, I don't eat breakfast everyday. So... Now I'm very hungry. "Everybody enjoy have lunch time." That should be, Everybody enjoy your lunch time. "Our lunch time is 12 to 1 PM." Good! "I fast eat and sleep..." This works, but it sounds weird. Saying, I eat fast, sounds better. If you want to sound more formal, you could say, I eat fast and go to sleep. I hope that helps:))) You can message me if you need anything else. I like checking English! Have a nice day!!