The brilliant Chinses website:Taobao
Almost every Chinese young people goes to Taobao buy things.
For me, if i want to buy some toilet paper,books or clothes, this website is my first choice.The reasons are:
First and most importantly ,the price is cheaper than supermarket’s.
Second, it’s convenient for the customers.We don’t need to drive cars to the market and carry the heavy goods.
Third,we could find whatever we want on this website,from clothes to vegetables.
Fourth,after we bought a stuff,we can leave an comment to let other customers know what the stuff really is.
And the website has big discounts two times a year.Many people would buy some daily necessities for the whole year.
By the way,the website is www.taobao.com.
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The brilliant Chinese Website: Taobao
Almost every young Chinese people person goes to Taobao to buy things.For me, if I want to buy some toilet paper, books or clothes, this website is my first choice. The reasons are:
First and foremost: importantly The price is cheaper than supermarkets.
Second: It’s convenient for the customers. We don’t need to drive our cars to the market and carry the heavy goods.
Third: We can find whatever we want on this website - from clothes to vegetables.
Fourth: After we have bought our stuff, we can leave a comment to let other customers know what the stuff really is is really like.
And the website has big discounts two times twice a year. Many people will buy some daily necessities enough to last for the whole year.
By the way, the website address is www.taobao.com.
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Hi Katniss. You have almost convinced me as I have a Taobao account but never use it I like to purchase my fruit and vegetables from my local Chinese people and also any other necessary items.
Your entry was well written. There were mostly just some corrections needed with the verb tenses, which I know is a common problem when learning english.
Keep up the good work!
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Two weeks ago i placed my first Taobao order (for books and shufa supplies). It was difficult, because I don't live in China, and my Mandarin is limited. But Taobao Wow! So many things available, and the prices are great.
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