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Hello, friend!!
The next Day i saw "mía y el león blanco" is beautiful movie, I'm fascinated by mia y el león blanco. I think you learned about the animals and the important to care the nature, because the humans sometimes don't care the world and this is very important because, the world belongs to everyone.
i think you like this movie because I know you love the nature and you like to help this, maybe you feel identified with the principal character because is girl to do a lot things to defend the Leon and teach people about the meaning of the nature and the animals.
I really recommend this movie because is fascinating, interesting, and you feel a lot of emotions that I can't explain, but I think is the best movie because teach the people to care the world, the animals because is a beautiful gift that nature gives us.
For that reason I think is important to see these movie because maybe change the thinking of the people and help the world.
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Hello, friend!!The next day I saw "mía y el león blanco". It is a beautiful movie, I'm fascinated by mia y el león blanco. I think you learned about the animals and the importance to care for nature, because humans sometimes don't care about the world and this is very important because the world belongs to everyone.
I think you like this movie because I know you love nature and you like to help this, maybe you feel identified with the principal character because is girl to do a lot things to defend Leon and teach people about the meaning of the nature and the animals.
I really recommend this movie because you feel fascinated, interested, and a lot of emotions that I can't explain, but I think is the best movie because teach the people to care for the world and the animals because it is a beautiful gift that nature gives us.
For that reason I think it is important to see these movie because maybe change the thinking of the people and help the world.
Your use of the pronoun "you" was a little confusing.
For example
"I really recommend this movie because you feel fascinated..."
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