School life
When I was in kindergarten I don't want go to the school. Already then I knew how difficult it will be. But on the other hand this is time was very cool.
In firsts classes I'm tried good studed. But after a time I don't care. However I was a good pupil. And over the years I was been a good girl.
In secondary school started so much interresting moments. I had a 2 friend. Darina and Julia. We always goes for a walk and played in different games. Did you hear about Winx? Oh yeah, it's cartoon. Well, we were as them. And we believe in our power, magic and other world. So many imagination. These things did our life very interesting, saturated and full of magic. Other girls in my class made fun of us. I was angry, really, but later I just ignore them. Stupid girls.
After else few years we had a boyfriends. And then we started drift away. Everyone lived with owns boyfriends. We finished the school and finished our friendship. It's sad but it's true.
Nowadays we don't meet and don't communicate with each other. Everyone live own life and don't need to someone from us.
In sum my life in school was been great and wonderful. But my adult life just begins. And it's awesome.
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School Days
Back in the kindergarten I didn't want to go to school. Even then I knew how difficult it would be. Turns out that school was pretty fun.
At first, I tried to be a good student but after a while I stopped caring. However, I remained a good student.
I had very interesting moments in secondary school. I had two friends, Darina and Julia. We'd always go for a walk and play different games. Have you ever heard about Winx? It's a cartoon. We liked to role-play as it's characters. We believed we had magic powers and that we came from a different world. Vivid imagination. Things like that made our lives very interesting and magical. Other girls from my class would make fun of us. I would get pretty angry but I'd always ignore them. Stupid girls.
After a few years we got boyfriends. Then we started drifting away from each other. Everyone moved in with their boyfriends. When we finished the school our friendship ended. It's sad but it's true.
Nowadays we don't see each other and don't communicate. We all have our own lives and needs nothing from each other.
In sum, my school days were wonderful. Now it's time to be an adult and it's awesome!
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School life
When I was in kindergarten I didn't want to go to school. I thought I knew already how difficult it would be. But I was surprised. This time was very cool.In my first classes I tried to study well. But after a time I didn't care (or stopped caring). However I still was a good pupil. And over the years I had been a good girl, too.
When secondary school started I had so many interesting moments. I had two friends, Darina and Julia. We always went for a walk and played different games. Did you hear about Winx? It's a cartoon. Well, we were as them. And we believed in our power, magic, and other worlds. So much imagination! These things made our life very interesting, saturated and full of magic. Other girls in my class made fun of us. I was angry, really, but later I just ignored them. Stupid girls.
After a few years we had boyfriends, and then we started to drift away. Everyone lived with their own boyfriends. We finished school and finished our friendship. It's sad but it's true.
Nowadays we don't meet and don't communicate with each other. Everyone lives their own life.
In summary, my life in school had been great and wonderful. But my adult life is just beginning. And it's awesome.
I kept editing light, because I like how you write :) It is playful and also very well done! Remember when you talk about something in the past, that happened before, all the verbs need to be in past tense.
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Hi ,
Due to your poor level you should write shorter texts .it is impossible to correct you because in fact we will have to redo the whole thing
Sincerely
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