The perfect holiday
A holiday is very difficult question! I want usually to have a comfortable relax. But I think sometimes that a travel in mountains or a woodland will the most perfect! City dwellers need to be on the nature, fresh air and a lot green. We need to have a silence. We have a lot movement and an activity. We should learn to hear the nature.
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A holiday is a very difficult question!
I want usually to have a comfortable relax. I usually want to relax comfortably.
But I think sometimes that a travel in mountains or a woodland will the most perfect! travelling in the mountains or forest will also be perfect!
City dwellers need to be on in the nature, for fresh air and a lot green.
We need to have a silence.
We have a lot movement and an activity.
We should could learn a lot to hear the nature.
I broke down each sentance of your paragraph. Great writing! I would focus on your sentance flow. :)
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