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Hi everyone!
I work as a stockman in a large electronic store in Russia. Today were a lot of costumers, because today is Sunday.
The next two days will holidays.
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Hi everyone!I work as a stockman in a large electronics store in Russia. Today were a lot of customers, because today is Sunday.
The next two days will holidays.
Good luck getting through today!
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Hi everyone! I work as a stockman in a large electronic store in Russia. Today there were a lot of costumers, because today is Sunday. The next two days will be holidays.
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Hi everyone!I work as a stockman in a large electronic store in Russia. Today were a lot of costumers, because today is Sunday.
The next two days will holidays.
Your first sentence is perfect :D
The second sentence could be changed to:
1. Today, there were a lot of customers as it is Sunday.
2. There were a lot of customers today because it is Sunday.
3. Since it is Sunday, there were a lot of customers.
Explanation: It's a bit repetitive to say today twice in the same sentence - unless you were doing it deliberately for emphasis. (However, it is not grammatically incorrect.)
Finally, I believe your last sentence has already been corrected, but you could combine sentences two and three and it might look something like this: There were a lot of customers today because it is Sunday and the next two days are holidays.
Great job.
Keep it up.
Em
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