My trip to Hawaii
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I went to Hawaii for my graduation trip. I stayed there for a week.
Because it rained for a few days from beginning, I enjoyed shopping at the Ala Moana Center.
In a fine day, I went to the Kualoa Ranch, which is the shooting location of the Movie "Jurassic Park" and "The Karate Kid".
I drove a buggy car and took a cruise there. It was a great scenery.
In another day, I went hiking to the Diamond Head and Coco head.
They were hard to climb, but the views from the top of the mountains were awesome.
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My trip to Hawaii
I'd be grateful if you could check and correct my sentences.I went to Hawaii for my graduation trip. I stayed there for a week.
Because it rained for a few days from the beginning, I enjoyed shopping at the Ala Moana Center.
InOn a fine day, I went to the Kualoa Ranch, which iswas the shooting location of the Movie "Jurassic Park" and "The Karate Kid".
I drove a buggy car and took a cruise there. It was ahad great scenery.
InOn another day, I went hiking to the Diamond Head and Coco head.
They were hard to climb, but the views from the tops of the mountains were awesome.
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